Re: FF: Thoughts of Dreams

[Kris <krismpy@xxxxxxxxx>]

I like the descriptiveness of this piece--very
vivid. You might want to read back through it so
as to catch some word problems that a spell
checker wouldn't catch. There's a few places you
typed the same word or phrase twice, and a couple
places where a word was left out. That's not a
big thing, though. All in all, a good read. 
Willow's dream is nicely done. Nothing fancy or
over-the-top, but it feels exactly that--like a
dream.

Kris

--- AXMODEFRED@xxxxxxxxx wrote:
> TITLE: Thoughts of Dreams
> AUTHOR: Arimis Adkinson
> DISCLAIMER: All characters belong to Joss
> Whedon and Mutant Enemy. I 
> don't own anything.
> SUMMARY: Willow's dreams and nightmares of
> Buffy and other things.
> SPOILERS: None.
> DISTRIBUTION: If you want it take it just let
> me know where it's at.
> AUTHOR'S NOTES: This is number seven in the
> Thoughts series
> Feedback: Yes please I crave feedback. I use
> the praise to write faster
> and the criticism to write better.
> 
> ( Willow's P.o.V )


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