Re: Lonely Knights 1 and 2

[Kris <krismpy@xxxxxxxxx>]

Part 1 got off to a great start. The action had
me on the edge of my seat right away, which
quickly turned to intrigue at what happened in
Spike's crypt. And Willow's dreams were
intriguing as well.

I liked Anya's and Xander's small roles. They
were amusing as always. :)

The scene in which Dawn realized Tara was for her
was a little hard to follow. It either switched
tenses or changed narrative or something like
that which made it feel a little off.

Giles's phone conversation with Quentin was also
a bit hard to follow. It all ran together,
though that may be a formatting snafu.

I'm still wondering whether Spike is good, bad,
or somewhere in between in this. I'm sure time
will tell, though. :)

You definitely have me curious and wanting more
of this story.

Kris



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