Re: Fic: The Orb Of Mentez (1/1) Revised.

[Kris <krismpy@xxxxxxxxx>]

--- buffythebushkangaroo
<buffythebushkangaroo@xxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> 
> 
> Just a bit of fun.
> 

Very fun indeed! It felt like an Indian Jones
movie. Loved the action, loved the humor
(especially the one-liners), loved the B/W
interaction, loved the school with the children
giving Giles a hard time. :)

Just one typo that jumped out at me in this part:


> "Eek!" Willow frowned as she felt her backpack
> growning 
> exceptionally hot.

I'm also wondering why Buffy and Xander couldn't
have rappeled (sp?) down to the ground from the
helicopter instead of parachuting? But the part
with Buffy chewing out the pilot, plus Xander's
reference to "Red Dawn" made it more funny
anyway.

And it's wonderful to know Buffy's soda of choice
is Mt. Dew--a girl after my own heart for sure! 
:)

Kris






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