FIC: Stormriders [1/1]

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Ah, I finally get around to feedback on this one. See, Anne-Lise, I
didn't forget!

(Or at least I un-forgot quickly?) (Shhh! Don't tell her that!)

Ahem?

--- In buffywantswillow@y..., "buffythebushkangaroo"
<buffythebushkangaroo@y...> wrote:
 
 
>You big meanie!

Well, what's the point of being a little one? 

>(You liked Enigma?)

Yes, for the 26th time, I liked "Enigma". I liked it when I gave
feedback for both parts, I liked it when you complained no one had given
you feedback on it and I wrote to point out that I had, and I liked it
when yet again you said you hadn't gotten any feedback and I went into
the corner and pouted. (Okay, without the actual going into the corner
part, but still?)

Now to the fic: 

>Buffy tousled Willow's hair, and then on impulse leaned over and kissed
her cheek. 

Ahhhh (okay, I'm easy, I know).

>Steve Rogers, once known as the hero Captain >America but now a 
>weapons analyst for the Strategic Hazard >Intervention Espionage 
>Logistics Directorate, 

Nicely logical post-Cap career.

>"But the Initiative is a whole can o' worms we don't >want made
public..."
  
Yeah, T.I. does seem like an inferior Marvel Comics plot, doesn't it?

>He jerked his thumb at Spike, who was 
nonchalantly trying to make an exit.
 
That's my Spike! Just because I'm anti-B/S doesn't mean I don't love
him; he's such a perfect rotter. (Why soften him up to pair him with
Buffy? Ah, OT rant, sorry.) 

>Spike stared. "Er, yeah. Yeah!" He strutted beside >her. "Chums, we
are! Old pals! Er," he leaned closer >to her and whispered, "Who the
hell *are* you?"

See above. LOL.

>End Part 1.
 
This would betoken a "Part 2". I would enjoy seeing it.

(This week's tactic: The Soft Sell.)

Appreciatively,

Dan