Re: The Slayer And The Witch Chapter 1/? - Flying Lessons

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Stef,

My stupid connection went out and took out my original fb with it, so
this one will probably be rather terse. Sorry.

A fine start, with nice details on the industrial section. (But I don't
know if it ever gets to be anorak weather around here?)

Oh, and don't worry about using British Empire spellings. Just keep the
American characters American, that's all I ask (no thinking in metric,
for example).

Great memory for details on the 12 cemeteries in Sunnyhell (and that's
just in the city limits?)

Nice theory about why Buffy would be reticent--the Angel experience has
convinced her that perfect moments don't last, so she doesn't want to
push things. Sad, but believable.

A little confused on chronology--I suppose because Season 6 has just
started in Aus. So you've got Buffy resurrected and W/T splitting over
magic, but not Buffy's current mental state and consequent actions.
Okay. (Heck, I like it better this way, anyway.)

And glad to see you've kept Giles. Six eps without even mentioning his
name, heading into tonight (Aargh! I just hope they put in a line about
him sending a gift?).

Shocking plot twist at the end, but now I understand the title. You
have a sick sense of humor (or humour).  
Which, in my book, is a good thing <eg>

I've already got chapter 2 and I'll fb that presently. Thanks again and
I enjoyed it very much.

Dan