Re: FF: A Twist in the Tale (2/?)

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

GW,

Zingy little chapter 2. The backstory on Mishra was handled quickly and
convincingly, as was the "I'm really Buffy" chat with Giles. (But while
there may have only been three people in the library in "Prophecy Girl",
Xander and Willow found out about it right afterwards--"as the
soon-to-be-purple area of my jaw will attest, I did not just 'let' her
go.")

Willow's recognizing Buffy by her eyes was well done, and an
unintentional nod to "Who Are You" (having recognized a transformed
Giles that way in "A New Man", Buffy-in-Faith is upset that Giles can't
do the same thing for her, so it's very sweet to see Will actually do
it).

And Mr. Buffy's physical reaction was a hoot, and totally believable.
It must just be plain strange walking around with all those extra parts
being felt, much less having them stand up and salute the tasty witchy
goodness.

Glad to see you're continuing, and look forward to more.

Dan