re: Re: FF: Second Chances: Chapter Two

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Um, see by writing a cliff hanger, if it's done right, then the reader wants to come back even if it's just to see what happens to the cliff hanger. < waggles eyebrows >

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> What is it with you writers leaving us hanging, its not fair! LOL I didn't 
> read the first part of this fic, at least not that I can remember. But from 
> what I did read the plot sounds really interesting. I'm looking forward to 
> reading more :)
> 
> Casandra
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Aeris Jade Orion

Grey Fox, and cause of Discord.

Gabrielle: "Do you deny spying on these women?"
Joxer: "I resent that."
Gabrielle: "Do you deny it?"
Joxer: "No, I just _resent_ it."

Joxer: Hello--heh-heh-- name's Joxer-- spelled, uh [Clears throat]--
J-o-x-e-rrrrrrrr. 

Rh: "Would you wanna make a baby with me?"
Jox: "What?!"
Rh: "Will you help?"
Jox: "Wait a minute! You want me to-- to-- to-- make a-- "
Rh: "Right-- will you?"
Jox: "Of course not! Hey, listen! We're not just machines, you
know, you can use to-- . Besides-- you know, uh-- we can't just
do it on command. We need stuff like, uh-- cheap motel rooms and
dirty pictures and lingerie-- stuff like that! We're _not_
animals! But I can get those things!"