Feedback all around

[Kris <krismpy@xxxxxxxxx>]

In trying to catch up, I'm lumping a bunch of
feedback for different authors together.

Inell--loved "Secrets and Lies." Nice, short,
and to the point series on coming out to Joyce
and their friends. Cool how most everyone knew
already and was ok with it.

Nice to see "Road Trip" updated, but where's the
next part of "Rough Magic?" <pout> I was really
loving that one.

Kirayoshi--loving "Defenders of the Night." I
don't know anything about Gargoyles, but you give
just enough description so that I'm learning as I
read, yet don't get bored and skip ahead to the
Buffy stuff (I tend to do that with some
crossovers). "Sun's Birthday" was also a great,
angsty read. Nice touch having Willow room with
"Anne" while in L.A.

Anne Lise--"Coming Apart" is getting good, please
don't stop now. Some pretty funny parts and
one-liners thrown in for good measure, but "too
much kitten urine in the blood" takes the cake! 
Gotta say I'm not all that depressed over Riley
being shot. Well, now that he's married and out
of the way, maybe I'll spare him a stray thought
or two--he's at least pleasant on the eyes.

Aeris--tops, as always, with "Second Chances!" 
Loved all the wonderfully angsty stuff. Glad I
read each chapter back to back so I wasn't
hanging too long over Willow's death. Still, you
had me worried a bit even into the next part. 

I'm wondering, though, what does a deer have to
do to get in the headlines? :) The only time
deer make the news around here is when they get
hit by a car (sorry couldn't resist since that
line made me laugh so hard I cried). 

Loved the curse explanation for Willow's magick
addiction--much better than the lame-ass excuses
on the show.

One question about the article Buffy was reading
in the microfilm: Did you mean sanitarium or
insane asylum as the place where Willow was held
after she was found covered in her brother's
blood? And speaking of her brother, glad to know
he was alive in the end. The scooby gang could
use another male these days. :)

Once again, I think you hold the record for Buffy
and Willow hitting the sheets the fastest in a
story in which they aren't already lovers. Love
how you get right to it!

Kris - halfway there to catching up
















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