Re: BuffyWantsWillow::

[Jana Salgueiro <evilwillowbr@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

hey dan, thanks for the feedback
i got so happy that i started to do the snoopy song until my syster come to me and calls me xander freak alike, i'm kind overemotional or something, i'm improving my english, but it's hard for me to spot all the mistakes, specially at 2 in the morning, well thanks anyway. By the way, you actually know the names of the brazil soccer team, J i don't even know how many guys are playing.
luv. Jana Slagueiro (Ghost Panther)




danspector@xxxxxxxxx wrote: Hey, Jana, nice to have you back writing.

That was cute, a literal treatment of Buffy's metaphorical arc this
year: seduced by a vampire's siren song and saved by her friends'
(well, one "friend" in particular's) love for her.

Yes, it could have used proofreading, but most of the typos weren't a
problem. The only truly disconcerting thing was when Willow apparently
means to say "I saw that the vampire had hypnotized you with his song"
and it came out "I hypnotized you with some weird vampire-style song",
which is quite different. But, since my Portuguese remains limited to
the names of the Brazilian World Cup team, I try not to be too hard on
your English, lol.

Anyway, thanks a lot :)

Dan





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