Re: FF: Fallen, part 1

["blinviz" <debvii@xxxxxxxxx>]

--- In buffywantswillow@y..., "carrkjar" <carrkjar@y...> wrote:
> hey - a short Buffy series. A little dark, enjoy.

OOh, dark! Love dark! And a post-Wrecked B/W fic: YAY!

Okay, heroin addiction hurts my soul. It's probably good for me that 
this is written and not seen because I'd be a big, gloopy ball of 
sorrow that couldn't see to read, but the analogy is enough to get me 
into the mood.

I enjoy the way you've put all the characters to good use, Frau Ash. 
Very nicely done and not at all forced, ya know?

In the fic I'm constantly writing in my head, Tara often says, "I think 
she's always been in love with Buffy," so...heh.

The ONLY thing that kinda bugged was the magickal erasing of the 
stutter. Don't know why, but it just didn't feel right to me, somehow. 
I'm not sure Tara would actually appreciate the gesture.

I'm looking forward to the next installment. Nice hook there at the 
end.

Thanks for sharing!

blinviz