Re: Feedback to Jolie and Blinviz - Fallen 1/1

[Dana Hunter <carrkjar@xxxxxxxxx>]

Message: 12
Date: Tue, 30 Apr 2002 18:53:26 -0700 (PDT)
From: Jolie Takacs 
Subject: Re: FF: Fallen, part 1

wow can't wait to read more!
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Jolie - Thanks very much! More is headed your way. 
This little piece is complete. <g>

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- In buffywantswillow@y..., "carrkjar" wrote:
> hey - a short Buffy series. A little dark, enjoy.

OOh, dark! Love dark! And a post-Wrecked B/W fic:
YAY!

Okay, heroin addiction hurts my soul. It's probably
good for me that this is written and not seen because
I'd be a big, gloopy ball of sorrow that couldn't see
to read, but the analogy is enough to get me into the
mood.

I enjoy the way you've put all the characters to good
use, Frau Ash. Very nicely done and not at all
forced, ya know?

In the fic I'm constantly writing in my head, Tara
often says, "I think she's always been in love with
Buffy," so...heh.

The ONLY thing that kinda bugged was the magickal
erasing of the stutter. Don't know why, but it just
didn't feel right to me, somehow. I'm not sure Tara
would actually appreciate the gesture.

I'm looking forward to the next installment. Nice
hook there at the end.

Thanks for sharing!

Blinviz

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Thank you very much for the feedback. I just had to
write something after Wrecked and tie it into the
season opener. There was so much they could have done
with both episodes and I think they missed some major
opportunities. So, I'll take advantage of it. <g>

I agree about the stutter and probably wouldn't do it
a second time around but I do see her gradually losing
it except maybe when nervous. I also like how the
gang pulls together to help Wills instead of this
weird distance everyone has this season. After all
these years of trauma and love - what the heck
happened?

I'm rambling now.

blessings
Hnter





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