Re: Digest Number 1122

[Dana Hunter <carrkjar@xxxxxxxxx>]

Message: 6
Date: Wed, 1 May 2002 23:50:02 +1000
From: "Stefan Akerblom" <nagarek@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Subject: RE: FF: Red Moon Rising, part 5 B/W/T

Hi Hunter.

Well, another very satisfying chapter of your
story, I find myself devouring it avidly, wanting very
much to find out how it's all going to turn out, the
love triangle, the dilemma of Buffy's bite, Oz's
betrayal and his behaviour, although I find him
totally despicable, in spite of me liking the laconic
little guy in the show. You've portrayed him as a
sinister and devious evil little man, quite a
turnaround, and a really good deviation from the
'norm'. Of course I especially want to see more
W/B/T action, which I'm sure will eventually come as
events unfold. The characterisation is really good,
especially of Tara, I readily find myself seeing her
doing the things you write about. Really looking
forward to the next instalment, off now to read your
new story. Thanks again for sharing this with us.

Stefan Akerblom

* * * 

I liked Oz in the series but something about his
wigging and changing in New Moon Rising just hit me
with this. I can see the action in my head as I'm
writing and hear the character thoughts. Glad others
are hearing and seeing it as well. 

Message: 8
Date: Thu, 2 May 2002 00:03:45 +1000
From: "Stefan Akerblom" <nagarek@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Subject: RE: FF: Fallen, part 1

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Fallen 1/1

Hunter .... oooookay, how come some people have so
much talent and the rest of us struggle??? 

<blush>

>> Another great story and yet again something I'll be
hanging out waiting for. You address some things I
found wrong or lacking in the show, especially the
sacrifices Will was committed to making to bring Buffy
back, what dangers did she really place herself in?
The show really didn't explore fully enough and you
delved into that a bit deeper, well done. 

I agree actually. I really think the show missed some
great opportunities on a lot of levels here. Having
Tara leave instead of helping Wills after the crash
bothered me. Not going more into the spell Willow did
to bring Buffy back bugged me. And no followup with
unprotected sex with that rat? Bugged me.

I like your 'consequences', they are certainly dark
and nasty, and something massive to overcome. And the
cliffhanger ending is good too, a baby to Rack huh?
It'll be interesting to see where THAT leads. More
please and quickly! :o)

Stefan Akerblom

* * *
More headed your way. :)

Hunter




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