Re: Fic: If It Pleases You (part 2/2) W/T/B NC17

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Whoa! Serious kink (credibly motivated, which is good, because I'm not
a kink-for-its-own-sake type, personally), but what I liked best is that
you snuck in some wonderful work on Tara's character, showing us her
experiences in the gang through her eyes. Really an indictment of the
show's writing, that they never probed as deeply--we got plenty of
"Riley adjusts to Scooby life" scenes, but we never even saw Willow
telling Tara about Slayers and so on. Makes a character I always felt
was pretty much a blank slate (yes, deliberate allusion) much more
empathetic.

Well done. Also, the sex. :)

Dan