Re: FF Children of the Earth (7/10)

[jeepy91@xxxxxxx]

Well this had just about everything in it! 

I loved the comedy of Hope being drunk. Or as it turned out, which I wasn't 
expecting, pretending to be drunk! And the snowball metaphor was nice in 
there as well. You write Buffy first person so well I could totally picture 
the entire thing in my head.

Hate seeing Buffy and Willow fighting, but I can see where Buff would be 
having problems with Willow being so magical again. But you made the fight 
so realistic, the emotions running high, the hurt, the anger, the confusion. 
It totally ran the gamut. Such a good job!

And Faith, well I can just imagine Willow's reaction to Faith. She had such 
a problem with Faith 'sharing her people', so now that she finally has Buffy, 
Faith comes back to possibly take her away. Will defending her girl was so 
cool. Even if Buffy ended up taking Faith's side LOL

And I adored the explanation of the soulmates kinda thing. And I've been 
wondering where the title Children of The Earth was coming from, so you 
finally answered my curiousity.

And I had never heard of Hedwig and the Angry Itch, so it was all completely 
new to me. But it's a fascinating concept, and it works so well in this fic.

But you left us up on a cliffie again, no fair! Giles is helping the bad 
guy, that can't be good :(

Anyway, just absolutely loving each and every part. But you knew that already 
;)

Casandra
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Buffy:"I could wrestle naked in grease for a living and still be cleaner than 
after a shift at the Doublemeat."
Willow:"Plus, I'd visit you at work every single day."
-'Normal Again' Shooting Script