Re: Fic: Red Skies at Morning (part 6-7/7) W/B NC17

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Bear,

Still behind, but getting there. Much like B/W, heh-heh. But at least
you made it to smoochies, with a soupçon of kink for your friends on
that list.

Loved Buffy being protective, Willow being panicky, Xander being a good
friend. Especially dug the idea that Willow always knew she was bi, it
was just one more unrequited passion she was carrying around.

And I especially dug the good lines you gave Xander, whom you really
write quite well:

>"The King of Brood is not what Buffy needs. She broods plenty all by
herself."

The neatest summation of what's wrong with B/A since The Brow himself
said "you deserve someone who can take you into the light".

Hmm, that just gave me a thought, but I'll make it another post.
Anyway, keep up the good work.

Dan