Re: RoundRobin - Chapter 1

["amberbensonfan" <AmberBensonFan@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

I was worried that Willow's outburst would be seen badly, but I'm 
glad that the feedback so far seems to be that the scene has affected 
people, which is what I was going for. The RoundRobinites agreed 
that this season had faults that we wanted to specifically address in 
our story. My big gripe was that there was a complete breakdown of 
any and all communication other than basic 'pleasantries' between the 
core characters. It seemed odd that the gang was able to talk 
through so many things when they were face world-ending, full-out 
demons, but throw some regular humans in as the big bad with a spice 
of life and poof, communication went out the window and that was 
their biggest downfall. IMHOP. With Willow just having been in an 
accident (and if you've been in one you know how shaken you can get 
from it), still high on magicks, and just all out fed up with this, I 
thought this scene would have been a great place for her to finally 
lash out at Buffy. It wasn't problem-solving per se, but it opened 
the door to allow both sides to realize facts about each other.

I hope that came across :-) Thank you guys so much for the feedback 
so far. I hope you continue to read and give some awesome feedback 
too :-)

Up next - Kirayoshi. Then next will be either Hunter Ash or 
RainbowWriters.

Jude

--- In buffywantswillow@y..., "mudrat_26" <mudrat@f...> wrote:
> Ooh, I'm liking this. Such a strong reaction from Willow! My 
initial 
> reaction (an emotional one, before I actually thought about it) was 
> that it was quite unlike her - but hey, she's whacked out on magic, 
> so unpredictability is probably a given, yeah? An exciting and 
> interesting turn from the canon path....
> 
> So which bard is up next? You've set a good scene here - can't 
wait 
> for the next part. 
> 
> cheers,
> mudrat