Re: FIC: Deeper-Post Season Six Fic(1/1)

["Red Willow" <reddwillow@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

Oh i really enjoyed this one!

i love B's thoughts in the cemetary, wanting to avoid the center where she 
knows W is with T.

B's own guilt and anger at herself getting in the way of forgiving an 
accepting her friend back was really great, i liked the contradicting 
thoughts that ran through her head as she spoke angrily at W.

And the fact that W wasn't sorry for killing Warren.. and why should she be? 
i don't get that.. if i was all magicky and powerful and stuff.. i'm not 
sure i wouldn't have gone off and killed the person who killed my 
girlfriend.. i love her that much... and i feel like W shouldn't feel too 
bad about it.. i didn't say it was right, just that... it's hard with those 
kinds of emotions coming into play... Anyway!

i liked that she wasn't upset about Warren, but that she really hated 
herself about the rest...

and W pointing out that B was hiding behind Faith... thank you! it always 
made me so mad when they talked about.. oh we don't kill humans... faith 
killed Alan accidentally.. but B went right after her with the full 
intention of killing her to save her boyfriend.... grr.... anyway.. it was 
great how you worked that in there....

but what was really great was W making sure T made it and then B wanting to 
rescue her... making them both confront thier inner feelings... guilt and 
such...

falling down to the sea... that whole part was really cool with T coming 
along and all...

and then them being okay... with the possibility of more to follow.... and W 
wanting B to hold her through the night while she slept on T's grave.. 
wow...that really got me... it was so sweet and... just right.

Anyway... i know this was a bit long.... but great fic, i reallly enjoyed 
it.
RW

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