Re: Learning to live pt 1

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Jen, 

New author, woo-hoo! ::does listguy Dance of Unearned Joy:: Ah, it's
always good to see more people giving us the B/W love we need :)

Fine set-up, building the anticipation for the arrival of Sara (who
sounds intriguing). Great to see Buffy back in character and actually
concerned about Willow and wanting to act on it. (This was one of the
things that upset about Season 6--not only was sluggish, passive, Buffy
absolutely no fun to watch, it was 180 degrees from the girl who's
life's motto is "we don't have time to wait!") Looking forward to what
develops.

Some non-fic notes: the formatting seemed a little off, and the subject
line should have the "FIC" tag (ie, "FIC: Learning to Live [1/?]").
Just minor stuff, I admit.

Lastly, I couldn't help but look at your pairings line and think that
with a usefully-placed hyphen, it could read: Willow/Other-Willow/Buffy

So naturally, that gave me fic thoughts about B/W having some three-fun
with an alternate-dimension Willow. Anyone want to write that one?
(Points for NOT using VampWillow, just a displaced human)

Anyway, glad you posted and looking forward to more,

Dan