Re: FIC: Deterioration (2/?)

["japmap" <japmap@xxxxxxxxx>]

Hi Shannon:

Nice segment, very upbeat(considering!)and steamy. Very descriptive, 
easy to picture; hey,I'm ready to head to the market for some 
strawberries and whipped cream! Now please,please,please(puppy dog 
eyes) give Buffy a miracle cure, or even better...have Willow somehow 
cure her???  


Thanks for sharing. Anxiously awaiting more.
Japmap

--- In buffywantswillow@y..., "Shannon" <willows_gal_15@h...> wrote:
> Okaely-dokely second part! FB pleeeez! :D
> 
> Disclaimer: They're not mine? one day they will be? uhhh? they 
belong 
> to Joss & Co. 
> Rating: G, maybe PG for one kiss.
> Summary: Well, I can't say too much without giving it away. It's 
> saaaaaad.
> Setting: Sometime after season 6, veryyyy AU.
> Spoilers: None.
> Notes: It's really short, in the process of writing sequels.... 
Props 
> to Alicia for suggesting the "strawberries and cream" bit. ;)
> Distribution: my site, 
http://www.geocities.com/lusty_wrong_feelings 
> and anywhere you want, just ask me first and credit me :)
> 
> Spread across a traditional red-checked blanket, Buffy and Willow 
> eyed their snacks. Bread, cheese, tomato, butter, tomato sauce for 
> some reason, syrups, spreads of various kinds, mayonaisse, mustard, 
> hot dog rolls, the reason of which they were packed neither girl 
was 
> sure of, chocolate cake, chocolate in general, whipped cream, 
> strawberries and even the last bit of ice cream. "We're never going 
> to eat all of this." Willow stated. "Yeah, but isn't it fun?" Buffy 
> grinned. Silence fell for a few seconds, as they both inexplicably 
> thought back to the morning. 
> 
> ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 
> 
> Surprisingly, Buffy had been the first to awaken. She realised that 
> her and Willow had fallen asleep together, when she tried to strech 
> her limbs and instead of searing pain, she found that her legs were 
> entwined with someone elses. She had laid in Willow's arms, 
watching 
> her friend sleep. She watched her chest move up and down as she 
> breathed. She saw that her eyes were still red and puffy for the 
> hours of tears that had leaked from her emerald eyes. The same eyes 
> she had seen flutter open that moment. 
> 
> "Morning." Willow had said sleepily. "Morning, Will." 
> 
> "Buffy, I--" 
> 
> "Will, do you--" 
> 
> They had both smiled, amused at their minds being in 
synchronisation. 
> Willow nodded to her friend. "You go first." Buffy smiled. "I was 
> just gonna ask, do you wanna do something today? Something fun." 
> Willow's brow creased as she considered the options. "But Buffy 
> you've been so tried... and with the um... the..." Buffy had stared 
> down. She hated to feel weak, and that's exactly how she was 
feeling. 
> Buffy knew Willow had picked up on this, as she forced her 
expression 
> to brighten. "You wanna see a movie or something?" Buffy shook her 
> head. "I was thinking something a little more active... well, not 
> active but outdoors-ish. It's a gorgeous day," she remembred saying 
> as she indicated through the window, "And I don't really want to 
> spend all day inside. What do you say to a picnic?" Willow had 
> genuinely smiled at her friend's romantic.... er, playful 
> nature. "Sure, Buff." 
> 
> ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 
> 
> Buffy shook herself out of her daydream, and poked Willow. "Eeep!" 
> Willow squealed, the poke interrupting her train of 
> thought. "Willllllllll," Buffy drew out her friend's name. Willow 
> rolled her eyes. She knew that Buffy only used this term when she 
> wanted something. "What do you want, Buff?" Buffy put her best 
puppy 
> dog eyes on. "Feed me?" 
> 
> Those two words sparked something inside of Willow, and she felt 
her 
> knees melt and her heart turn to jelly. Or her heart melt, and her 
> knees turn to jelly. She wasn't really thinking straight. She took 
a 
> gulp of air, and replied. "Sure, Buff. What do you want?" Buffy 
> looked at her coyly. 
> 
> "Strawberries and cream." 
> 
> Willow took a spoon, and sliced a bit of strawberry onto it, then 
got 
> a can of wipped cream, and squirted some on the top of the bit of 
> strawberry. She aimed the spoon at buffys open mouth, and at the 
last 
> second Buffy turned her head, getting cream over most of her cheek, 
> and a bit on her lips. She made no move to clean it off, so Willow 
> leaned over gently to wipe the cream off of Buffy's cheek with her 
> fingers. She slowly put her middle and index fingers into her mouht 
> and sucked the cream off, then leaned forward to lick the cream off 
> of Buffy lips. As her tongue worked it's way around Buffy's lips, 
> Buffy captured Willow's mouth with her own, resulting in a deep, 
> sensual kiss. As Willow let out a slight moaned, Buffy used the 
> chance to slip her tongue into Willow's warm, wet mouth and massage 
> her tongue. 
> 
> After what seemed like hours, they finally broke apart, both 
panting 
> for breath. "What... how... ummm..." Willow blushed, as she tried 
to 
> get her words out. Buffy grinned, and, if possible, moved closer to 
> her best friend, and enveloped her into a big bear hug. "Hey Will?" 
> Buffy asked. "Umm, yeah?" 
> 
> "Let's go home." Willow smiled. "Of course... anything you want."