Re: FIC: The Spaces Inbetween (10-13/13) NC-17

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

RW,

Here's some long-delayed feedback for you.

Tasty wrapup to this fic, as you captured all the nerves and tension of
the first-time B/W coupling. Liked the tableau of Willow coming to her
in the shower as well as the realism of the hot water running out (ulp!)
Good idea to put on some music, too (although Dawn must have been sorely
disappointed <eg>)

As for Chapter 13 and the possible sequel, I still think it's awfully
slutty of Tara to hit on her ex's best friend, who lives with Willow and
while Willow is in the house, no less. However, the party does sound
like it has story potential.

Better late than never (I hope),

Dan