Re: FIC: The World Has Teeth 1/?

[JDMeans@xxxxxxx]

In a message dated 9/26/2002 12:47:47 PM Pacific Daylight Time, 
xenarip13@xxxxxxxxx writes:


> TBC...I may have an epic on my hands here..what do you think?
> 

I think that if you don't continue, we'll be storming your email addy with 
torches and pitchforks! I think you've gotta be nuts not to continue!

Beautiful start. Y'know that lump you get in your throat whenever you watch 
"It's a Wonderful Life" and you get to that part where George Bailey's 
standing on the bridge shouting, "Help me, Clarence! I want to live again!"? 
I got that with this story. I could hear Willow's voice reciting the letter 
at the beginning. You got a good start, mi amigo.

Kirayoshi
(oh, and if you don't get that lump in your throat when you watch 'It's a 
Wonderful Life', forget it, I don't wanna know.)