Re: FIC: Upon The Sea Of Chaos (1/?) (Delurker)

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Er, ditto, ditto.

(translation: read it, liked it, actual feedback to follow...what it
is, is, your fic came in during the 3 seconds on Saturday morning when
my chronically-full mailbox was full, and bounced out. Fics that get
into my mailbox have a much better chance of getting prompt fb, since a)
I have it on hand to read, and b) I can reply with a proper subject line
just by hitting "reply", and c) I have to get it OUT of the damn inbox,
asap)

Anyway, not confusing at all despite the fact that I know absolutely
zero about anything Anime. The comparisons drawn between Willow and
Lina were skilfully drawn, particularly in terms of relative power and
magic practice. Buffy's experience with the dimensional shift was well
done and I got a true sense of Amelia and Lina's bond.

Darn good work for a first venture into this pairing, IMO. I would
gladly read more, especially since you seem to have it well thought out.

Dan

PS--hey, I'll even give you a nitpick, that's how into it I was! Now,
okay, so I'll believe that Amelia's name marks her as royalty, but how
does **Buffy**, who isn't even from this reality, know that?? (See, if
I'm just skimming I don't pick up these little details)

(decides to hit "send" button before he gets too embarassed by his
chutzpah in trying to claim nitpicking as a sign of respect...)