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Re: FIC (final alpha-release): Upon the Sea of Chaos (1/?)

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Subject: Re: FIC (final alpha-release): Upon the Sea of Chaos (1/?)
From: "lusty_wrong_feelings" <lusty_wrong_feelings@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date: Tue, 22 Oct 2002 11:19:17 -0000
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That's really, really good so far, Matt! It's the kind of story that 
actually has a backstory, and those are always good. But to make for 
easier reading, try to make the paragraphs blocked, instead of 
indented. 'Cause I don't know about anyone else, but I was getting a 
little confused and reading the same line twice, and thinking "What 
the?", lol. But other than that, a great (and long... extra good!!) 
piece! :D

Shannon

References:
- FIC (final alpha-release): Upon the Sea of Chaos (1/?)
  - From: Matthias Engel

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