Re: Fic: Triune (11/?) B/W/T NC-17

[JDMeans@xxxxxxx]

Uh, question, Bear; In this chapter, Buffy was surprised that Wes was 
working for Angel. Didn't she know about that already? Didn't Buffy run 
into Wes in the Angel ep 'Sanctuary', when she tried to bring Faith in? Just 
before Angel beat the dogsnot out of Riley in "The Yoko Factor"? It's been a 
while since I saw that ep, so I could be wrong. Oh, since you mentioned 
Lorne's cousin, did this take place just before the A-team went to Pylea? 
I'm just curious, I kinda like Fred and wouldn't want to see her stuck in 
Pylea in your AU.

Still, decent continuation of the storyline, even if lacking in the basic 
B/W/T goodness you so enjoy. Oh well, future chapters, I trust, will remedy 
that situation. And hey, now that Anya's out of the picture, maybe Xander 
and Cordy will touch bases.

Kirayoshi