Re: FIC: Making Plans (1/1) NC-17

["SugarVixen" <eternal_slayers@xxxxxxxxx>]

Again I have to congratulate you on your fic. It was a perfect follow 
up of Making Sense. The first was Willow's POV, this one Buffy's. I 
really liked that, to have insight from both characters. Also, I 
thought that you wrote Buffy very well. Even after all these years, 
she is still insecure and scared to plan a future for herself. I 
really liked Willow switching back and forth between the lover role 
and the best friend role. That was sweet. I love your older Dawn. 
Still bratty but in a very funny endearing way. And I also noticed 
something that made me smile: The first fic is Making Sense and it 
ends with Willow saying that all of this makes sense. Then, in the 
sequel, Buffy's first thoughts in the morning are This doesn't make 
sense. Very well done. I really liked having both perspectives on the 
night's events and on the new relationship the girls have. 

Another excellent fic. YOU ROCK!

SugarVixen

P.S. HOT... not SMOLDERING HOT love scene there. WOW. That was some 
lovemaking. One of the best written sex scene i've read!