Re: Snippet: Well Then

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Anne-Lise,

Nice work. I appreciated the different style, the easy transitions from
past to present tense, and the enchanting image of Willow dancing naked
in the moonlight. Quite a lot of fun.

On the B/W/D thing: I actually quite enjoy the way you often
lightheartedly work it in (I can't read many deep, serious,
relationshippy B/D fics, though), but I understand that any hint of B/D
is a squick to many people on this list, all the way up to listdad
himself. Perhaps you could put a warning on future snippets containing
this, so those averse will be prepared? I know, you're not much for
headers, but perhaps it might be useful in this case.

Thanks for the goodies!

Dan

PS--JMO, but I thought this one might have been even a little better if
the end was a B/W consummation with Dawn looking on, hopeful of the day
she could join. As said, I'm all for "Educating Dawnie", but I like B/W
to have their moment first.

PPS--Speaking of your ventures into B/W/D land, could we ever see more
of your version of "24"? I absolutely loved that.

**flinches at scowl coming his way from Brasil** 
Sorry, Rod :)