hey, haven't read all your story yet, but i have to ask..
i live in a country where a bit more to teh north of where i currently live, teh sun is entierly gone for more tahn three or four months... this does sound like a great time for vampires, but then again.. during teh summer teh sun is up 24/7... what does the vampires do then?
i haev often found myself thinking about this, strangly enough....:-) is this something you are going to address in your story?
looking forward ti teh rest of your story...
joachim