RE: FB: Triune (22/?)

["TheBear" <thebear@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Thanks Matthias, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Sorry about the whole quotes, but I've written the whole story and every
other story I've done in the same way. It's more visible now because
I'm using more thoughts, but I didn't want to switch styles at this late
point in the game. 

I do specify by saying 'she thought' or 'she said' to differentiate.

When I finish triune, future stories will have the half-quotes around
thoughts. Until then, I apologize for the confusion. 



TheBear!

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-----Original Message-----
From: Matthias Engel [mailto:Solarsenshi@xxxxxx] 
Sent: Thursday, January 23, 2003 9:09 AM
To: Buffywantswillow; Magikalthree
Subject: FB: Triune (22/?)



And again I say wonderful. A part completly with some Buffy/Willow
action for a change was a nice idea. Your description of the individual
feelings was powerful and very convincing as always.

The only thing I didn't like that you put the thoughts in quotations
again. It's rather confusing.



Ja ne, yours



Matthias






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