Thanks for the link Dan.Okay here comes the feedback. I didn't read the entire story so I'm a bit lost as to what's what. The writing looks solid from what I read. No glaring typos, no incorrect puncutation, etc etc. The only thing that I really find - what's the word I'm looking for...annoying...is the character blocks. Some people like to read that type of fiction but I'm not one of them. I'm not big on script fan fic either. It's just a matter of personal taste. I like my fiction to run concurrent with each other instead of seeing it individually through each characters eyes. But like I said...that's just my taste in reading. To close on a positive note<G> I think you've got the character's voice down pretty good. That's something else I like in fiction - I like the characters to 'sound' like the characters and you did a pretty good job with that.
CN Wintersauthor of 'Irrefutable Evidence' from Renaissance Alliance Publishing Inc. and 'One Belief Away' from Baycrest Books.
Get your autographed copies at http://www.wintersproductions.com
From: danspector@xxxxxxxxx Reply-To: buffywantswillow@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To: buffywantswillow@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Subject: RE: ~Buffy*Wants*Willow~ FB, anyone, please? Date: Mon, 10 Feb 2003 11:23:52 -0800 (PST) "Reconnecting" [2/?] can be found at http://groups.yahoo.com/group/buffywantswillow/message/23421 Dan Who was working on Wednesday and had the fic bounce out of his chronically-clogged inbox, and who missed part 1 back in January because he was off-line, but will try to catch up...eventually...
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