RE: Fic: Stones In The Road Part One

["O'Brien, Rachael" <rachael.o'brien@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

I like it... I'm onto part two... not time for feedback yet..
rachael

[Moderator Edit: *grml* how often do I have to ask to please not
respond without deleting the story, UNLESS you are specifically
C&C'ing certain parts of it. It is unnessesary space that is wasted,
that results in higher bandwidth, and gets us one step closer to
having the archive full (Yahoo only saves 512MB, and even that could
be reduced anytime). So please, if you respond to a fic, cut the fic
out. Or better yet, provide good feedback of a story, because as
exilarating as 'I loved it' or 'wow, this is good, write more'
oneliners are, they doesn't help one improve their writing.]
[PS.: This is not specifically meant for Rachael, it just happened to
be this mail that got chosen for my response. Not that you're innocent
Rachael ;)]