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Re: Fic: Road Trip (19/19)
Inell, sweetie, cookie, honey, baby!
Ya done good. Great finish for a fun story. Uh one question though. The
following line;
> "I'll be tired of you, Willow," Buffy said with a loving smile. "I love
> you."
>
Uh, did you mean "I'll never be tired of you, Willow"? That makes more sense
than what you've got here. Just my POV, though.
Still and all, a fine read. Plus you wrapped up "Back in Boston", and have
promised a sequel (hmm, Willow vs. Faith. Somehow my money's on the
red-head!), Any chances of a sequel to Road Trip?
Kirayoshi
"Like any story worth telling, it starts with a girl."
--Tobey Maguire, "Spider-Man"
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