Re: Fic: Road Trip (19/19)

["suryan207 <suryan207@xxxxxxxxx>" <suryan207@xxxxxxxxx>]

Hi 

Im Susan, been mostly a lurker. I liked this fic because of its
intensity. The device of using so many posts added very little to the
intensity though. I think you captured that by the way you wrote. I
read it straight through, so I didn't really wait for the next part.

Have you ever considered trying to write a part using the actions of
the characters to convey their thoughts, without having the thoughts
written?

I particularly liked the idea that Buffy decided she would pursue the
relationship and her acting like it. Unfortunately, determined,
single-minded Buffy is often relegated to spells,(in Him she was
hysterically funny and well... focused) like love spells and cave
slayer. I think if you explored that in any number of ways it could be
a better story.

Thanks for the enjoyable story and uh sex,
Suryan

PS I always like a story where the girls need to fuck thanks again