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RE: FIC: Consequences 1/?
Good start, definitely interested in how everyone is going to react to
her revelation. One thing I noticed though is that you kinda switched
between the first and third person, but other than that, it was good.
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There were Swedes to the left of him
Russians to the right
A Czech at the blueline looking for a fight
Brains over brawn, that might work for you
But what's an American quarry boy to do?
Hit Somebody!
Paraphrased from Hit Somebody (The Hockey Song)
Warren Zevon featuring David Letterman
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Y ddraig goch ddry cychwyn
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Electronis Zappa
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