Re: Fic: Just Beneath the Surface (3/?)

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

To quote a better feedback than this: Fix 'em! Fix 'em!

So Tara killed Buffy, huh? (By taking away her Will, and thus her will
to live) Bad Tara! <g>

Good point in showing that Season Sux wouldn't just lead to guilt on
Will's part, but self-loathing. Gee, it would have been nice if
Willow'd been on the show this year (mutter, grumble...)

The annoying thing with current continuity is that I was reading that
divine flashback and thinking that Buffy should remember Dawn being
there, even though she wasn't. Stupid fake memories. And a wonderful
memory you created, with Joyce summing it up nicely. "Take care of each
other, girls". Awww.

But who couldn't love Willow? From the Alicia Bridges quoting to the
cheating to win the game of tag, just delightful.

Now you merely have to guide them through torrents of guilt, shame,
shattered psyches and despair...so get cracking!

Dan