FB: To Conquer Death

["Matthias Engel" <Solarsenshi@xxxxxx>]

NOTE: Sorry, if that might come out double. But I sent it about an hour ago
and it isn't in the archive. Dumb Yahoo...

Man, Rainne, that was FANTASTIC. I really, really loved it. You have a
talent for original characters I got to tell you this. Ever considered
writing originals?
I read through the whole thing in over two hours, totally spellbound. Thank
you so much for that sequel. Dakota leaving was a little sad although I
could see why you did it. Do you have any plans on continuing this? If, you
would have my attention very quickly at least. You have that special touch
really good writers just need that you can't really explain but that is
there.
The switching between scenes and characters was well done and only a tiny
bit confusing. What you might have wanted to do was include years or other
time pointers that are more clearly with rapid jumps of weeks and months.
Other than that, I hardly can find anything to complain.
Also you are making your stories romantic without losing sight of the
action. A talent not every writer has.

Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to more.

Ja ne, yours

Matthias

PS: And in case you haven't noticed, you just got yourself a big fan. ;)

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