Re: FIC: The red headed Slayer 6/?

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Jen,

Nice job of explaining PartyGrrl!Tara and yet keeping it consistent with
the character's history.

As for the W/B stuff, much as I am eager for them to face their destiny
(each other), I thought that Willow's attraction might have been moving
a little too fast while they were dancing. But any points lost there
were more than regained when Buffy told Willow about her feelings and
Will reacted very much in keeping with how she's been depicted here. My
only quibble would be that Willow was talking about her calling and why
she wouldn't work with Buffy, and neither character brought up the fact
that Buffy is a Potential who's living with her Watcher. Yes, not the
same thing as being the active Slayer, but I thought Buffy, at least,
should have tried to use that as a response to Willow's arguments.

Of course, now that the feelings, and the obstacles, are out in the
open, I look forward to seeing the two grow closer. Perhaps we could
have a training scene, with Buffy hating the fact that she can't keep
up?

Keep 'em coming!

Dan