FB for various fics (since end of May...)

["Matthias Engel" <Solarsenshi@xxxxxx>]

Hi!

Okay, I haven't got around to read much on the list lately so the last
couple of days I used to catch up. Here's short feedback to some of it.

Kirayoshi (Life and Choosen)

A nice finish to Life for the moment. I find it always funny - no offense
intended - if English-native people try to speak German... it's "der" not
"die"... ;)
Chosen was interesting. We are right in the middle of S7 (well, nearing the
end) and a season behind with Angel (because they decided not to run them
parellel during S6 for some weird reason), so I can't say anything to
spoilers or storyline. However, I liked what I read. The idea so far is
interesting and the interaction between the characters well done.

Vixen ("Of Stakes & Spells")

And yet another Season Four rewrite/behind the scenes...
Don't get me wrong, I do realize the convient situation and with the
exception from certain last seasons that I don't want to acknowledge, the
only time where both girls were boy-/girlfriend free was right at the
beginning and in Season Four after Oz and before Riley/Tara. It's just...
the concept is a little... Overused? Drained? Simple? I dunno...
Besides that I liked your story. The style was a little rough here and there
but you get used to it. What I liked were the little twists you put in here
that became small problems for the two. At the beginning I thought it was
going to be one of those "hook them up quickly and everyone must be
satisfied" fics but it wasn't and I'm glad about that.
The Buffy/Tara flirting was nice... Any potential there? Sorry, I'm also a
helpless Wuffara-shipper...

More? You haven't posted anymore parts in over a month or did I miss
something while sorting through my mails?

"Off Course" from Kimber

Very nice. I enjoyed that one very much. It was chatacter interaction as we
haven't seen it for a long time in the show and very much more appreciated
than the original. Dan raised most of the points I would have said already,
so I guess I can only agree. It was good to read something from you again.

That's it for now. I will see if I have something to comment on the rest.
Some I just decided against reading yet like Ida's fic which is a little to
detailed in a part of S7 that hasn't aired over here yet while Kirayoshi's
fic was more spoiler-free in this regard actually (well, as much as you can
go with a spin-off).

Ja ne, yours

Matthias


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