Re: The First Time--A Vignette (B/W)

["bighotvirgo" <BHV@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

just for the record, I didn't say that using the word "fisting" to 
descrbe Buffy's hands would be "bad." I said I felt it might be 
"distracting"....<grin>



--- In buffywantswillow@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, "ivygort" <
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> Title: The First Time--A Vignette
> Author: Ivy Gort
> Spoilers: None
> Email: Ivygort@e...
> Rating:I don't know
> Feedback: Yes, Please! I live on it!
> Archive: Please Ask.
> Pairing: Buffy and Willow
> Disclaimer: I don't own them, I'm just torturing them for you.
> Summary: None
> BETA: Ann Marie is the Great Goddess. 
> Lastly, I am no Mad Hamlet. He is my hero.
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> The First Time--A Vignette
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> "I can't do this without you!" Willow told Buffy as she stood 
there, her raw emotions clearly written on her face.
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> "I don't know Will!" Buffy answered confused and frightened. 
"This is the first time I've ever done it like this.."
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> "I have faith in you! I know you." Willow whispered quietly to her, 
reaching up to take the Slayer's hands into her own. The Witch's 
expression earnest and loving. "I know you've never done 
anything like this before and it's okay; I'll tell you what to do. Just 
trust me." That was it. As she looked into her best friend's eyes, 
Buffy knew she had to try...she couldn't fail Willow.
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> Kneeling carefully into the space Willow had created for her, 
Buffy kept her hands by her sides until Willow reached out to 
take them into her own. Willow just smiled as she placed Buffy's 
hand on her plump, smooth melon. "It's okay Buffy," she said 
softly. "Just be careful."
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> Buffy was panting with the effort it took to control herself, she'd 
never felt like this before, the heat was rising up; she'd never 
knew that this could feel so good. With Willow's gentle 
encouragement she eased her fist down into the wet, slick 
channel, watching her face the entire time, going by feel. Easing 
up when she felt it narrowing, tightening around her hand. Buffy 
glanced anxiously at Willow to make sure she was doing it right; 
she wanted this first time to be perfect.  
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> She felt the hard nubbin at the dripping core and marveled at 
its perfection. How it could feel so wonderful in the heat that 
surrounded her? Buffy opened her hand and used her fingers to 
caress along it until she had a good grip--she looked up at 
Willow--and at her gasping nod ... Buffy yanked out the core of 
the watermelon cleanly.
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> "Great! Buffy, very good!" Willow clapped at her Slayer's 
accomplishment. "One down and now only two to go before the 
party." The Witch said pulling the de-cored watermelon closer to 
her along the kitchen floor. She then opened the bottle of Vodka 
and poured it into the opening.
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> "We let these soak overnight, Xander and Anya will never know 
what hit them tomorrow at the picnic," she explained as she put 
the watermelon's core back into place.
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> Buffy smiled, satisfied, and reached for the next one... It'd been 
so hot since the AC had broken .
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> The End
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> Author's note: This was written as a gift to Ann Marie and BH 
Virgo for their help on AfterLife.
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> Ann Marie, when editing Afterlife, made me take quite a few  
cliché's statements out of tPart 7 and I felt it made the story 
stronger. And BH Virgo had to explain why it would be bad to 
use a certain words when describing Buffy in Afterlife.  
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> But, me being me, I could help myself using both the cliche's 
and the word in this story.
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