FB: Taking the Initiative (7/9)

["Matthias Engel" <Solarsenshi@xxxxxx>]

Hm, one typical apocalypse averted... Hey, we didn't have that in quite some
time and many fics. So, this was meant positive. :)
The German was actually rather accurate, a little off here and there, I
believe you were searching for "Erde" as the Earth element. "Masse" would be
matter. A few other words were funny but it was okay, considering that old
High German is phrased funny anyway and I'm no expert on that.
I liked the interaction and how you are giving Tara actually a bit more of a
character in this. I understand that a lot of people here don't like her
(which is a total personal opinion that I totally understand) and often if
she shows up in a AU she seems to be the standard witch friend of Willow and
nothing more. I have seen the theme often enough. You had a little bit more
interaction between in this part which helped a lot.
Thanks for the update.

Ja ne, yours

Matthias

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