Re: FIC: Girl's Night Out *TOO* (1ab/?) (B/W) (PG)

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Ivy,

Nicely layered angst, between Willow's secret and Buffy's fear of
reversion. Is this really the first flat-out lie Buffy's told Will?
Yeah, I guess if they were all sins of omission before.

Liked the Devon cameo, but have to wonder about the diminished role of
the other characters. I was wondering about Joyce/Dawn before Buffy
ended up using them as her excuse. And is Xander out of town, too?
Because it seems logical that Will would have called him.

But Willow tending to injured Buffy is always a winner (makes note to
reread "Starlight" by Janine at first opportunity). Looking forward to
more,

Dan