Re: FIC, Fruits of Her Labor, Scene 2, part 2

["Blin Vizzable" <debvii@xxxxxxxxx>]

Dude!  This is totally great!

Do you practise Zen techniques, BHV?  'Cause you've totally got 
that down in the Buffy-at-sunset section.  That was neat.  I liked 
that foray into Buffy's inner-slayerness.

Your handle on the characters' voices is really strong, IMO, and I 
think you've struck just the right balance with the amount of 
internal monologage.  Also cool is the way you don't reveal 
information until it's totally necessary.

I feel sooo so bad for Buffy.  I could totally see her having that 
reaction to Faith's news (and not just cuz I have had the same 
reaction on Buff's behalf), but Faith is right that Will should know.  
Speaking of which, how/why did Faith decide to tell Buffy first 
anyway?

This is a very intriguing mystery.  I'm eager to see where this 
goes.

blinviz


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