FB for Fruits of Her Labor 2&3

[Red Willow <st8sboroblues@xxxxxxxxx>]

BHV!! totally lovin' this story! i had to wait on reading scene 2a/b because i knew i wouldn't be
satisfied with just reading 1 part! hehe. is good stuff! :D 

right off the bat, i love buffy's thought about faith.. 'she's radiant in a pushy... butch...
athletic... natural born killer kinda way...'  that was great - i cracked up. and their
conversation following.. their interaction - their diagogue and their actions - all very well
done... really enjoyable. and with faith asking buffy why she can't forgive herself if she's
forgiven willow - that was very cool and really well written. 

i really enjoyed the way the scene moved along.. the way the tension built and faith's thoughts as
buffy told her about her dreams. faith's view of the glass falling from buffy's hand was a nice
touch... and then buffy's attack on faith, telling her to stay away from willow - all really good
stuff. 

i wanted to yell at buffy though, in her hung over state for lying to willow (even if it was
expected) and not telling her. its frustrating (and you do such a good job creating that) to read
them not communicating.. to know willow's expecting more from buffy and is pissed off/hurt that
buffy hadn't recieved any of her messages and wasn't talking to willow. i just wanted willow to
get on a plane then and go see her... and i'm very glad that after talking to dawn and seeing
tara's grin that willow's going to see buffy. 

and ending with a hint that they might finally make love...  oh, you do get my hopes up!  :)

wow, that was a little bit longer than i intended... but i really am enjoying the stroy and can't
wait for another update. :)

RW



--- BHV <bighotvirgo@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Fruits of Her Labor, Scene 3
>
> Author: BHV
>
> Pairing: B/W
>
> Rating: R (language)
>
> Feedback: Yes, please. bighotvirgo@xxxxxxxxx
>
> Archive/Repost: Please ask my permission
>
> Disclaimers: Buffy, the Vampire Slayer and all characters therein
> belong solely to Joss Whedon,UPN, Mutant Enemy, et al, not this author.
> This story was created purely for fandom purposes. No copyright
> infringement is intended. Song lyrics from "Broken Telephone by the Be
> Good Tanyas, © S. Ford, Porch Music/Saltwater Music/SOCAN, 2000. Lyrics
> quoted for entertainment purposes, no copyright infringement intended. 
>
> Summary:  Buffy, her ankle still broken, is recovering, physically and
> emotionally, from Faith's visit of the night before. Willow is in
> Cleveland. She misses Buffy.
> -----------------


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