Feedback for 'Redheaded' & 'Slayers & Angels'

[Alex <pga1ht@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

Jen -

Well that's certainly an interesting twist on things - instant family!  I will admit I did get a bit confused during the flashbacks, but the end back in present day helped clear it up.  And I agree that Columbus / central Ohio is a nice place to live, but the football mania does get a bit tiresome, after having put up with it for 30 + years!

 

Bob -

More good stuff.  I especially liked Wills' floating trick.  I'm not sure I've told you before but I really like the concept of Shadow.  He's a good character.

 

Both of you - I'm definitely looking forward to more - write faster! 

 

Alex

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