Re: FIC: A Firm Foundation (7b of ?)

["Blin Vizzable" <debvii@xxxxxxxxx>]

You made me late for work!  Good job! High marks!

I realised that I need to go back and review the party parts (O the 
hardship!) because I seem to be misremembering how the 
recording was done.  Because of that, I'm placing a lot more 
responsibility on Tara's shoulders than on Claire's and Casey's.

(I've also lost a sense of how much time has past; i.e., how long 
B/W have been together.  The comments about doing it all over 
Sunnydale didn't quite click for me.)

"We've both done something shitty to one another."  Hissssss.  I 
was a bit surprised that Buffy didn't react openly to that and that 
Will let it pass so readily -- whether she feels mondo guilty or 
not.  Then again, I guess she does do that, doesn't she. (Man, 
because of S7 -- and to some extent S6 -- I'm having trouble 
remembering what Willow is really like.)  Also, despite the fact 
that I hurled epithets at Tara after that remark, I must say that I 
have a bit more respect for your Tara than the one on teevee.  
Yours is a human being. :)

I'd also forgotten that Will in this story is not practising witchcraft.  
I'm wondering if you're planning on doing something with that?

Anyway, good show.  The characters 'sound' just right, and that 
slap, though shocking!, worked for me.

blinviz


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