A good point. I’ll have to figure out a way to modify that. Or explain it.
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Hey Bear!
Another steamy chapter in your series, always welcome.
One continuity error though; you had Joyce quietly explain the phrase "Beast with two backs" to Giles. This shouldn't be necesassary since the phrase in question originated in Shakespeare's Othello. When Iago informed Desdemona's father that his daughter had married the Moor Othello, he proclaimed that the couple were "making the beast with two backs", largely to enrage Desi's dad! While it hasn't been established on the show, it should be a safe bet that Giles, an educated Englishman, would be more than familiar with the Bard. Maybe Giles would have to explain the phrase to Joyce, or then again maybe not.
Kirayoshi
"It is written that he who makes the best egg
salad shall rule over Heaven and Earth. Don't ask me why egg salad. I have
enough aggrivation."
Canada's like a loft apartment over a really great
party.
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