Re: FIC: Love Shack (CH3) B/W NC-17 1/6

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Belated fb:  

(Two weeks is belated?  You should see some of the stuff I still haven't
fb'd...)

Kim,

Wonderful to see you continuing this one.  Liked the idea both of Willow
stressing over Buffy's life and her agitation at Buffy's fatalistic
streak.  I suppose Oz was her way of avoiding the issues for a while,
which is why his departure upsets her so.

Also enjoyed the dialogue:  "I am hereby move-free."  "I would do
backflips, you know I can..."  Very authentic in tone, I feel.

Thanks, and well, y'know...more, please.

Dan


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Willow: "It's a good fight, Buffy, and I want in."
Buffy:  "I kinda love you."
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