Re: [Nymphomaniac Fantasia Part 2 - Astral Romance]

[Mad Hamlet <Mad-Hamlet@xxxxxxx>]

Greetings,


> > aight, here's the second part. 

Bravo. 

The title is, to someone of my preferences, somewhat off putting but I noticed
the file size. That and the fact that I hadn't seen your work before I gave it
a read.

Glad I did.

I think other authors should sit up and take notice of your work. The details
are excellent. Setting scenes, expressions, movements. Quite good. Then
there's the plot. The first part didn't seem that spectacular in terms of
plot, nothing I hadn't read a thousand times(And probably written) but the
descriptions were enough to make me take a gander at the second part and
viola. 

About the only thing is the repetative self questioning and descriptions that
I've seen far too often. 
'Feeling she had but was afraid of' yadda, yadda, yadda.

Everything has weak spots, there are not exceptions your story included but,
unlike many, the strong far, far, far outpowers the weak.

Again, bravo.

I remain, as always,
Mad-Hamlet


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