A very emotional piece. You kept Buffy's frentic thoughts building
and then kept them going at such a pace that I was captivated.
Captivated almost up to the point that Willow forgot what
Buffy's "Real" name is, and it's not Elizabeth.
But except for that one minor indescretion, it was good.
thank you
-mike
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