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[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Xekari,

Nice start.  I liked Willow's "trip to Willow-land" over the demonic
flies, and "there was some sleeping going on".  Good voice work.  And
then from Will spotting the kiss-look to the foreplay in the kitchen and
the more serious movement on the couch and the actual kiss, it all
seemed to build quite well.  

The "morning-after" doubts and guilts and withdrawing were sadly
believable, but the rating cheers me up with it's promises of
more-than-snuggles.  Can't wait.

(Dunno if Buffy'd call her "witch" so consistently, thoughat the time
she seemed a bit of two minds about the 'craft.  [See "Fear, Itself",
"Pangs" and, most recently to the story, "Something Blue"])

More, please.

Dan

PS to Dutch:  remember, don't include the fic with the feedbackthat's
a straight-from-Rod rule.  (Only mentioning this online so others will
remember, too.)



Willow: "It's a good fight, Buffy, and I want in."
Buffy:  "I kinda love you."
                     'Choices'

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