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Re: Fic: The Memory remains



Blacky,

You've asked to know what we think so her goes my opinion.
Great idea and very interesting beginning and would be fine a it is. But you leave some questions. Will Tara just fade away since she's pissed at Willow anyway? If so, how do you make the following chapters as interesting if not more so? I love a good Fluffy as much as the next but some dark angst, the kind that makes you sit forward and read with your heart rising in your throat is what I live for. If you can do as well or better with the following chapters, then all I can say is I can't wait. But don't be afraid to try, and if you don't get any FB, just try harder it's worth it.

-mike


--- In buffywantswillow@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, "nowheretoroam" <the_only_lone_gunman@h...> wrote:
Title: The Memory Remails
Rating: R

Author: NoWhereToRaom (or you can call me blacky)

Pairing: W/B

Disclaimer: Mr. Wheden owns it all, I make no money off of this
all
characters belong to their rightful owners.

Summary: Season 6 the events in tablu rosa happen a bit
differently
sorta angsty. buffy POV

Chapter 1/(dunno depends on if i get feed back)

ok guys thats it my first venture into actualy fic writing so
please
review and let me know what you think if its any good ill finish
it
and add the more raunchier bits
 bye bye
           NoWhereToRoam



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