Re: Fic: The Memory remains

["mike" <wizathogwarts@xxxxxxxxx>]

Blacky,

You've asked to know what we think so her goes my opinion.
Great idea and very interesting beginning and would be fine a it 
is.  But you leave some questions.  
Will Tara just fade away since she's pissed at Willow anyway?
If so, how do you make the following chapters as interesting if not 
more so?
I love a good Fluffy as much as the next but some dark angst, the 
kind that makes you sit forward and read with your heart rising in 
your throat is what I live for.
If you can do as well or better with the following chapters, then 
all I can say is I can't wait.  But don't be afraid to try, and if 
you don't get any FB, just try harder it's worth it.

-mike


--- In buffywantswillow@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, "nowheretoroam" 
<the_only_lone_gunman@h...> wrote:
> Title: The Memory Remails
> Rating: R
>
> Author: NoWhereToRaom (or you can call me blacky)
>
> Pairing: W/B
>
> Disclaimer: Mr. Wheden owns it all, I make no money off of this 
all 
> characters belong to their rightful owners.
>
> Summary: Season 6  the events in tablu rosa happen a bit 
differently 
> sorta angsty. buffy POV
>
> Chapter 1/(dunno depends on if i get feed back)

> ok guys thats it my first venture into actualy fic writing so 
please 
> review and let me know what you think if its any good ill finish 
it 
> and add the more raunchier bits 
>
>  bye bye
>            NoWhereToRoam



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